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    This is my first upload in here. I am brazilian and my english isnt perfect but I will try my best!!



    SUMMER


    The heat from the shower made Aline goes back to the past months ...
    12 MONTHS AGO


    2 MONTHS AGO


    Those sweet memories gave her strength to continue ... But to what extent, what changed, what she did wrong?


    ... She couldn't believe what happend, her face was hurting, 3 days passed and she got a black eye. She looked at her herself in the mirror and started to cry.

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    (The first charpter.I am using a translator as my english is not so perfect I hope there are not many mistakes.)



    5 WEEKS AGO..


    That afternoon, while watching tv Aline felt unwell in the stomach .Michael was just coming to the room, and came to her aid:

    "Are you okay hun?"
    "Y-yes, just dizzy..."
    "Come, let me help you to go to bed, You may need some rest. You were too busy the last past weeks with the wedding your shop..."
    He came over and gently kissed his lips.

    "Michael,wait. I need to tell you one thing:-I am pregnant!"
    "what?" He said
    "I think I am pregnant. I am sorry...I know we wanted to wait..."
    "How long you know this hun?" He asked her calmly
    "I think over a month, I guess was before our wedding. I thought that was the stress but I did the test this morning...I need to go to doctor to confirm."
    "Oh my!This is great!- You are pregnant!" He smiles "I couldn't be more happy hun, don't say sorry my love. this baby is mine and you too. We are a family now and this is what matter"

    During lunch time before Michael left to work they talked about the baby, making plans for the future. Aline couldn't be any more happy. Her life was in the right way. She married the man she loved, She was going to open her clothes shop and now one more great news. Her first child...them first child...

    But Micheal did want she to notice that he did not liked the news...Was not on his plans to become a father so soon...


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    no comments? =(

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    I thought you have a great start of your story... keep it up...
    and don't sad if you haven't got any comments...
    I can promise you that there are a lot of peps that's gonna read your story....

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