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    Post Sarah's Poetry

    Seeing as we have a Poetry Page now, and I've been writing poems since High School I thought perhaps I might share a few of mine. I haven't written much new stuff but I'll likely start in time but for now I have some nice, old stuff.

    I wrote this Poem when Nate who is five now was born.

    Something Wonderful

    A soft cry is heard clearly in the night
    As a child is born into our sight
    So beautiful is he, his eyes ice blue
    My darling son this is you.

    I remember holding you in my arms
    These tears of happiness and alarm
    This single, small, perfect dream
    Finally something good has come to me.

    I will hold you close, safe an warm
    Protect you from any coming storm
    You'll be my hope, my life and love
    Together we'll make it through somehow.

    You'll be my anchor when times get tough
    So special you are to me
    I can't believe such has come to be
    Thank you god for my son.

    This one I wrote for my hubby William


    William

    To William

    Your touch upon my skin makes everything hazy
    Your voice so husky and warm drives me crazy
    That oh so perfect smile of yours
    Makes me wonder about you more

    This mystery that is you darling
    Is oh so charming
    I love how you touch and hold me
    I love how you flirt and scold me

    All of this and more
    Is how I know our love is sure!
    True you play to many games
    Spend so much time doing everything the same

    Yet this is how I found you and how you found me
    Really I don't think I'd change one, small thing
    This man I love is the man I see
    An nothing could be more perfect to me.

    Sarah Rose MacDonald




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    Beautiful poems!!
    I especially love the first one!
    I felt that when my sons born....

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    , I realy hope you`ll post more. I just love the poem about your child!

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    I love them both. They were really lovely and touching



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    Ah thanks everyone :-)

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    Beautiful

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    Post Some Poems For You Guys

    This is the very, first poem I ever wrote wanted to share it with you guys.

    The Seductive Dance

    She dances her seductive dance by night
    A fire burning casts an eerie light
    Dark passion flames in her eyes of red
    As she sings her haunting song of the dead.

    The haunting melody echoes through the land
    Bringing forth a once silent death band
    Crys of time long gone by is the only sound
    Then awaken the people of the ground.

    They rise from the ground like a rageing sea
    The creatures of the night can now be free
    They walks towards their mistress, their queen
    And blazing eyes is all that can be seen.

    Screams of the dead she has awakened
    The living souls she has forsaken
    Will you survive?Will you live?
    Not if you have nothing to give.


    Sarah MacDonald


    The Crossing



    We dwell in thoughts of times long gone by
    Never really understanding why
    So much emotion locked inside
    So many voyages towards the other side.

    A journey through the murky gates of time
    A trip from this world to the other side
    The spirits sway too and fro
    To a melody of which unknown.

    In this sea of darkness he dwells
    His soul to the devil he will sell
    So much hurt and anger he has inside
    A cage he has made his own mind.

    Ever dangerous are these traps we create,
    Beyond the ebony threshold he shall wait,
    There is known a sight of decay, a taste of lime,
    A despair felt beyond mirrors, beyond time.

    Sarah Rose MacDonald

    This Poem was written for The lost Baby Girls of China. I'm sure many of you have read in a few cases due to the population in China and only being allowed to have one child, poor families who have baby girls abandon them in Orphanges because they want boys to carry on the family name.

    I read a book a while backed called " The Lost Daughters Of China" by Karen Evans published in 1998. This book touched me deeply, breaking my heart as I followed the adoption process of a family adopting a daughter from China. I learned many sad, disturbing things that darkened my outlook on life this is a poem summing it all up.

    Secrets Of Life

    Shadows play across the land
    Darkness falls by god's hand
    A child's cry is heard in the night
    A lost daughter of China, hidden out of sight

    Her mother watches a distance away
    Honestly she has but nothing to say
    She waits until someone picks up the small child, but three days old
    Then she turns fading into the cold

    Why would she do that? Why would she leave her small daughter behind?
    Sadly China's one child policy is not so very kind
    Families wanting only sons, to carry on the family name
    Give up their baby girls and feel not a bit of shame

    They drop them in streets, on orphanage steps, in the woods, by rivers
    Babies everywhere, abandoned, left alone, lost such thoughts bring me shivers
    Yet such is the way now, such is how the world is going, to hell
    Yet there is nothing to be done or said, we soon shall fall into darkness so deep you'd swear it was an empty well.

    Sarah Mac donald



    It does not flow as well as others I've wrote but really my emotions were rather off. These Poems are a bit of the darker side of me but most of my poems are dark somewhat exotic in a way. I hope you liked them. :LUTM:

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    Sarah my appologies that I have just read these.

    So touching, true, and well written.

    Thank you for sharing!

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    these truly are talented writings I enjoyed reading them

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    Mine you wrote for me is gone. I am so upset I did not save it :(
    This is just so upsetting.

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